The Armour Archive

I finally finsished an evolution of my armour essay, and would like to know what people think. More detail, less. Anything you think I am missing?
http://home.armourarchive.org/members/winter/harness/
Hammer away.

To make it useful to others, i think you should go deeper and deeper on each step you made, and add as many information on your kit, and real counterpart as possible.